Mens Jewelry Vintage Can Someone Please Edit This Sentence For A Business Card - 10 Points To First Correct Helpful Answer!?

Can someone please edit this sentence for a business card - 10 points to first correct helpful answer!? - mens jewelry vintage

OK, I am a card, and I write a sentence for the card to the sentence below .... similar to (because it's based on Internet business, I do not want my address, phone number, unique name, email and website to the end - this sentence is the most important part of the map in the middle)

Original unique resale as handmade jewelry
Salt and fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, wire wrapping, antique furniture, jewelry, scrabble tile, silver and 14kt gold filled mens jewelry and silver, and Italy, women + more.

It seems to me a little long, but can not make it shorter, without some important information.

Can someone tell me weather wordsSwarovski crystals must have capital, so I have to change a comma in the right places, and usually only, or word, it is grammatically correct ...

THANKS

4 comments:

Theycoul... said...

Original, a jewel, a case in hand. Promotions included. Salt and fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, ceramic Scrabble jewelry, silver and 14 karat gold fill, and the ornaments of men and women. Classic rooms, incl. much of Italy, and more ..

Geraldo Walter Bluebargly said...

An original handmade jewelry, including:
Salt and fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, wire wrap, classic pieces, jewelry, scrabble tile, sterling silver and 14 karat gold fill, as men of sterling silver jewelry for women in Italy and more.

Jewelry has been misspelled. Changed a few things, but otherwise sounds good.

Beyond Mordant said...

Original unique handmade jewelry:

Salt and fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals,

filament winding, classical pieces, Scrabble tile jewelry,

Fill sterling silver and 14kt gold, sterling silver Men

Adornment of women from Italy + more.

Block information for easy reading ... and spelling.

nevaeh_7... said...

Original, unique, handmade jewelry.
Salt and fresh water pearls, glass beads, Swarovski crystals, wire wrap, classic pieces, scrabble complete ceramic jewelry, silver and 14kt gold and sterling silver coins from Italy. Offering and much more.

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